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) I'm going to send it off to a certain other member that was nice enough to give me some pointers (That's my girl!). I came to a point where I wasn't sure where it was going to go, so I stopped for a bit and am working on an outline for at least the first half of the book. I have the outline for the next few chapters, but this morning as I was getting ready for work, it just kinda hit me, the hook for the story. I've been thinking for almost a month "there has to be a hook or a main point where the story starts getting dramatic or on a larger scale" and it came to me out of nowhere. Soooooo, I'm going to finish my outline for the first half this weekend sometime and continue writing. Once the entire story is done, I'm going to go back and add more imagery and so forth that you guys have suggested, but not too much. I don't want to bore my readers. I want to entertain them. Adding too much non-essential or important info about what kind of table is in the bedroom or what brand socks they characters wear is going to put people to sleep. I think I finally figured out a really good route to take it but I need to develop it a little more before I start writing the next few chapters.
Thanks though. As soon as the next part is complete, you'll definitely get it. You and Nick pretty much had the exact same comments/suggestions so I'm listening to what you have to say and building from that.
..I would of had a few words..got the manager and left with a free sandwich.

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ORIGINAL: H34 pleasure
Well...If that was me..I wouldn't be that understanding or polite....I would of had a few words..got the manager and left with a free sandwich.
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Canada is weird,


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ORIGINAL: Muddydawg75
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Canada is weird,
Yeah... WTF is up with calling ham, bacon??
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Sounds like the McDonald's near work in Dallas... I always have to check my order before I leave because 7 out of 10 will be wrong... Don't blame you for wanting them to speak english.. they are in America now... English is the official language...
IMO.
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i actually am very supprized they find so many people to do that work, i for one could not see myself doing that......... i would rather shovel crap out of stalls for some ranch than do that.
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